Who I Am

Half man half beast Unpredictable so to speak Quiet boy in the back, thinking, content Studying everyone Gathering information for the Beast in me For he is the manipulative one within The man you see is a good man However, He too has to pay for the Beast's crimes

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Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2024 10:18:00 AM

Brian, congratulations on your win in my Who Am I Contest, wonderfully penned, well done, Constance

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/2/2024 6:46:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about who you are through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Brian Damien
Date: 12/3/2024 6:32:00 PM

Thank you for the uplifting words, God Bless

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/30/2024 6:53:00 AM

Hope it’s not a case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde

Brian Damien
Date: 11/30/2024 12:15:00 PM

It would sort of seem that way but no it is not , thanks for your comment