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Written, November 09, 2024


Poetry/Crumbling Verse/Who Am I
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All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Human Written

Written in my created form, Crumbling Verse

 Example for my contest.

Who I Am



                As I move through
         the layers of grief since the death,
      and the comments, opinions and beliefs.
         I see myself clearly,
  as a person with integrity and ethics,
  with character, honor, honesty and morals.
     It is safe to,
  look within my heart and soul for I hide nothing.

               I can express
         myself with creativity,
      with my writing skills and abilities,
         the words fall from my pen.
  I am unfolding in beautiful fulfilling ways,
  and working on the process of positive change.
     And I am willing to forgive all,
  willing to let everything go-  all the hurt feelings.
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Brul Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 4:33 AM
A great poem unfolding the inner core of a tender-loving poet. I wish I could write my own expression of who I am ,too. Warm wishes. ^___^ JCB
La France Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 2:46 AM
Jcb, thank you for the compliment and comment, I bet you could write a beauty, love
Woods Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Sounds like you are in a very good place Constance! Growth is inevitable but growth unguided or misguided, can be unfortunate. Expressed so beautifully here! We tend to either be too harsh on ourselves or too forgiving lol... sound like you have a good balance! Xo
La France Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 1:31 PM
Crystol, thank you for the lovely comment, though these past days have been full of grief, I think that I have grown as a person, seen what is inside my soul, love Constance
Bergeron Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 11:58 AM
Chère Constance, Please allow me to share in these same lofty aspirations which you have so eloquently allowed your pen to express. Words to live by. Merci and keep thirsting for more art. With sincerity, Gilles Bergeron
La France Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 3:27 PM
Gilles, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, blessings Constance
Read Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:40 AM
I admire your honesty Constance, it can be hard to forgive, but it has it's own rewards in the end. Have a lovely day. Xx
La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:00 PM
John, thank you for the compliment and comment, I must forgive because to hold the hurt is like a darkess within me, and I do not want that, blessings Constance
Tor Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 1:43 AM
A heartfelt piece Dear Constance. Your words are what we already know about you Dear Lady. This world can be cruel and sometimes, forgiving those that inadvertently hurt us by their actions, or scouring remarks brings peace to one's soul. Jesus said, "Forgive them for they do not know what they do." I think everyone can relate so well with your thoughts in this heartfelt admission of yours. I applaud your courage and the message you send here. I hope many will see this. Wishing much love and healing. Hugs...
La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Michael, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment. I came to this conclusion with the help of your healing words and the compassion of you and your wife, because to hold the hurt within me of people who probably could care less has no value, its too high a price, Hugs, Constance
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November 9, 2024 at 5:44 PM
Oh, Constance, that is so heartwarming!
La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:04 PM
Lise, thank you so much for the compliment, love Constance
Greenhough Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 1:51 PM
This expression of self approval is very dynamic. A solid resolution is noted in a poetic theme that you have penned in your words. Well done.
La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Hilda, thank you for the comment and compliment, love Constance
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November 9, 2024 at 1:14 PM
What an inspiring , positive and honest poem Constance...l love your honesty and vulnerability. You are a truly a lovely lady and good soul! I hope you are doing OK! Cuddles... Debx
La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Deb, thank you for the lovely compliment on my poem and myself. I am doing better but still not healed yet. Love Constance
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November 9, 2024 at 11:11 AM
- A person with heart and soul... lovely written, Constance :) - hugs
La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:08 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you for the compliment, appreciate, hugs, Constance
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