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Who Do You Think You Are

I want to be what's inside of me, Watching you, is watching what's inside of me You are the mirror image of what I want to be! WHO ARE YOU??? A brother I never had or the person I'll never be? HOW DARE YOU BE, for all the world to see what's inside of me! There's a deep welling hole of pain watching you being me being the me, I'll never be except inside my heart and mind On the outside, there's a plump mum of two - a little strange perhaps but so are you! On the inside there's you being me being you 24 August 2018. Slight revamp of a healing song from 1990's. Seemed a good fit to enter Caren Krutsinger's contest. Who do you think you are?

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Date: 8/24/2018 11:36:00 AM
Very clever, very enjoyable.
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Virginia Waters
Date: 8/24/2018 11:55:00 PM
cool, thank you

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