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11.04.2024
Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                 Because of his advanced age
                                   the mass was accelerated
                                     with a couple of hours
                            Midnight could wear a wet look dress
                                  - soft sprinkling from above
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Beaufort Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:29 PM
Anne-Lise, the poor guy has a few issues. You describe them with so much kindness really. Your gentleness has an amazing quality.
Babcock Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 10:49 AM
This one made me smile. love phyl
George Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 11:22 PM
Quite funny dear Anne... both the poem and the image! I too have tried several times, but always I have received N/A. Love and Hugs!
Maverick Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Hmm...He makes a great case for God btw.' If anyone needs God.? Maybe he's a sketch Of myself on certain days lol))) May God bless You.!
One Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Interesting thoughts my friend.. Best of luck in this contest..
Narain Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 10:02 AM
Funny and cute poem.
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 11:06 AM
- Many thanks, Jay - hugs
Nicholsen Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 8:08 AM
Lovely write sweetie . Blessings
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 11:06 AM
- Many thanks, Yolanda - hugs
May Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Lol, Niely done Anne
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 11:06 AM
- Many thanks, Joseph - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 2:33 AM
Short, sweet and funny. You did well.
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 11:06 AM
- Many thanks, Victor - hugs
Empress Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 2:20 AM
Haha this is cute, the picture made me smile! And your poem is brilliant and very well written! Loved the creative nature of your word weaving! Pleasure always reading your work: sending you light always. Best wishes for the contest
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 11:05 AM
- Many thanks, Ink - hugs
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