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Hong Kong China crunch

clash of ideologies—

iron mixed with clay




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12/04/2019

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/5/2019 12:45:00 PM

'Iron mixed with clay' - such an eloquent observation on the turmoil they are facing-

Mark Toney
Date: 12/5/2019 4:46:00 PM

Thanks, Michelle. There's a similar expression in the Bible book of Daniel. It seemed appropriate for what's going on in Hong Kong. Cheers!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/5/2019 12:50:00 AM

Good one..

Mark Toney
Date: 12/5/2019 5:41:00 AM

Thank you, Jenish. ~Mark