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Who Are We At Our Core - NFC

Perhaps The remnant of the one celled amoeba Still transcending the primordial ooze Sucking sustenance from the Oozing awakening Of life

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Date: 12/28/2023 1:55:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write/great ending. Good Luck in the contest... "Happy New Year 2024" .................
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Date: 12/27/2023 6:20:00 PM
Interesting; I'm more of a transcendentalist person, lol. But I liked this...it made me think of God and how we should be grateful of small things...we are specks in a great universe. Great write!
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Date: 12/26/2023 8:28:00 AM
Always like your alternative poetry John.. its really quirky!
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Date: 12/26/2023 7:32:00 AM
Wow…oozing with discontent…rough imagery but great write.
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