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"Chugging through life, we've come far, pause dear hearts, to ask who we are." Quote by - Unseeking Seeker I think about my childhood days, For some parts I was in a daze; I think, do I remember it? Or did stories create this maze ! Soul, spirit and character knit, Though emotions have changed a bit; Each joy and pain seems enduring, For have courage to never quit ! Health fades as I am maturing, pills to slow death are assuring; my life quest a quiet battle, words of kindness reassuring ! My life journal I call- that hill, To not write words never that ill; Observations page after page, My words may make some hearts rattle ! I have arrived at a bliss stage, It transcends all joy, pain and rage; And cleanses my soul of all grief, To fling open with glee my cage ! ____________________ January 13, 2022 Poetry/Rubaiyat/Who Am I You Ask Copyright Protected, ID -01-1421-425-13 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Who Am I sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 01/14/2022 First Place

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Date: 1/15/2022 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write. "Love It" Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
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Constance La France
Date: 1/16/2022 4:31:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/14/2022 10:15:00 PM
Beautiful philosophy expressed in Rubaiyat form. Very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2022 8:47:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/14/2022 6:50:00 PM
Your concluding stanza compels us to ask ‘tell us more’ ~ thanks for sharing; this was the penultimate entry, so happy you decided to participate. Congrats on your fabulous win, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2022 8:49:00 AM
Seeker, thank you for the inspiration to write this poem and for the contest and my great placement, and for your comment and congrats, appreciate so much ~ friendship and poetry _Constance