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Who Am I, Really

Could I have always been wrong about me? I don't think I even know who I am anymore I don't have the strength to fix myself There's a three-foot deep glass door Infront of me and my reflection But the inside and out, don't match So I can't tell if it's really me And I'm not really much of a catch The only thing I can do is this But in battle I lost my own game I wasn't humbled, just remorse Trying, fumbling for my own name I think I've always been wrong about me I don't really know who I am I don't know that I ever did But I hope that one day I can

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/16/2013 1:28:00 PM

Amazing write, really throws your mind in a thousand directions thinking where's going next, really superb. Have a blessed day, Gordon

Skat A

Date: 5/1/2013 2:57:00 PM

I don't know JULI, but i like this poem. It defines a lot of lines, in me.Thank you for sharing. I'll be back later on tonight if not on my next day off. How about naming a particular poem, on your list. I can't wait to read the poem you highly recommend. Take Care and have yourself a nice day. LUV* ~SKAT

Connie Moore

Date: 5/1/2013 1:15:00 PM

Magnificent!

Michael Ainsley

Date: 4/28/2013 3:30:00 PM

You are a spiritual being having a physical experience . Rod Mckuen once wrote if I don't know who I am maybe I can go back and find out who I was. I gave up that quest . I live in the moment and ask not who am I,but what can do for myself and others. It is a lot more fun that way and also rewarding,your freind michael

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/24/2013 8:16:00 AM

This is a marvelous poem! :) I can relate to this particular poem... I can't believe im the first one to comment on this poem! YAY! xD I sometimes wonder if I'm wrong about me. . . this poem allows me to think lots. I hope you have a superb week!