Who Am I - One Liner

Smelling like a domesticated  rose but all I am is a simple street daisy.







Not for the contest, but thanks for the inspiration..(Silent One 's contest)
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Manassian Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 10:10 PM
:) You are the essence of a flower...whichever kind....you exude beauty. Love you, sweetie!
Grahamburglar Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:57 PM
A rose by any other name? Better to be a rose-smelling daisy than a daisy-smelling rose, I would venture. What am I even saying? I guess I'm going to have to keep thinking on this. In the meantime, keep smelling rosey. -G
Green Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 2:08 PM
This is so well written. Such a wonderful thought is expressed in your one line piece. I'll take a simple street daisy any day over a domesticated rose. Very beautifully crafted.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 7:20 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Thanks for sharing it.
Vaso Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 11:36 PM
If one had to smell, one could not choose from such of natures beauty!
P  Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 6:27 PM
Says a lot in so few words, each flower has their own special nature.
A   Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 3:59 PM
No matter how you put it, Charma, you are the sweetest Rozeilly Around... Love LINDA
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 11:19 AM
I like them both... Very beautiful
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