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Who Am I You Ask

i cried out to you with my tempo i gave myself to you with my emotions i believed in you with my feelings i trusted you with my senses i danced for you with the rhythm of my beat i sung music for you with my melody i loved you with every ounce of blood in me i breathed you i hungered for you i made music with you.... perfect harmony but what happened? was it enough? is it ever enough? you still say you don't recognize me how can you say you don't know who i am i gave you my all and still you stomped on me ripped me from my environment laughed at me wrote jokes about me paraded my broken pieces everywhere you darkened me changed me for worse you stab me with your hatred you cut me with your un-true stories who am i you ask still laughing still cutting still breaking.... I'm the heart of the person you once said you loved.... will you ever stop?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/9/2011 10:51:00 AM
Welcome to poetrySoup Elijah. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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