Who Am I

I am light dawned on an eternity,
Promising tomorrows, giving today

A traversable feeling growling into conviction—
I am the fuel for the flame,
A rock for the lame

Where do I find home in which to land?
Do I seek refuge, or do I seek danger?
Am I vulnerable in my strengths? 
Am I solicitous in my aims?
Do I laugh?
Do I cry?

I am in the air you inhale, frequently skimming your ground,
Sometimes I move deafeningly—
And at times I float without a sound

I have seen the change in your eyes,
The moment you grew into a man
The moment you sobbed away sin
And exposed the evil hand

I am light dawned on an eternity,
Promising tomorrows, giving today

But who am I? 
Why do you hear me, when others vow I am myth?
Why do you listen, when the thunders threaten to deafen you?
Why do you doubt, when you have seen my wonders eye to eye?
When you have felt my hand on your lips,
Quieting your writhing, screaming soul?

Who am I?
I am the revealer,
In hope I am your chief
The spark in the dark that galvanizes you
The smoke in the air that sooths you

Forever and always,
I am the best of your heart,
And I am free with fires impermeable!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/24/2016 11:51:00 AM
An esoterically charged piece of delicous writing. Its a stunning thought to know we are all Eternal Beings(souls), and we may even have multiple lives :-)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/24/2016 6:17:00 PM
Thank you for your awesome comment! ~Laura
Date: 4/8/2016 1:59:00 AM
Wow!Excellent write,thats an intense piece! Justin
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/8/2016 2:01:00 AM
Thanks Justin. Glad to receive your sweet feedback. <3 ~Laura
Date: 4/4/2016 1:38:00 AM
Exceptionally powerful, Laura. I am in awe of the strength and intensity this poem who exudes. "promising tomorrows, giving today" ... definitely worthy of a repeat in this fine piece. It's a great way to describe our everyday attitude towards life ... as if we have tomorrow in our hands, but in truth only living in the moment, SO well stated. It's amazing to me how this could either be from the perspective of someone's soul or God (maybe the lines are blurred). I will simply call you Poet.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/4/2016 6:44:00 AM
Thank you so much. You're so thoughtful in your comments, and I really learn so much from the feedback. Glad to see you've enjoyed this one, and yes, I feel this poem pertains to the best in us, which is why I wanted the voice to have God-like voice - you are very...what's the word...perceptive, there you go. You're very perceptive when it comes to some of the more underlying things. --sometimes a big trial comes along and wakes us up to heightened potential and a more mature heart. This poem has everything to do with growing up, faith and unconditional love. ~Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/4/2016 1:45:00 AM
"The moment you sobbed away sin And exposed the evil hand" ... this part made me think more on the spiritual undertones. Losing that childlike innocence, revealing darkness you didn't think was there (can you pinpoint the time of life that that happens, or is it like most people and just gradual?) ... You have a darker mind at times, but this was amazingly rejuvenating.
Date: 4/3/2016 5:59:00 PM
Continuing in the same vein I see, Laura - You do it exceedingly well! Some marvellous lines forcefully expressed - Great bit of writing! My very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 4/3/2016 10:11:00 PM
I love your visits, John. Thanks dearididdle! ^__^ I shall check out your poetry soon sweet poet! ~Laura
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