Who Am I

Who am I?



Seeking absolution, I wander 
the alleyways of times gone by,

awash with wasted regrets, I 
crawl into the yawning crevasse,

clutching at straws as merciless 
time takes to the sky.

Drenched in the reeking stench 
of wrongs I cannot undo,

I scurry blindly through the 
maze,

seeking pain to convince myself 
that today’s reality is true.

Torn to shreds, my tattered 
mind bobs, weaves and 
swerves,

my fingers clawing at the 
jangled knots of my frayed 
nerves.

When does the moulting of skin 
cease,

crumpling dreams floating away 
with each passing breeze.

Shattered hearts lie mortally 
wounded, unable to mend,

washed-up and washed-out, 
cast into a palace of 
indifference,

no enemies to be found here, 
swallowed up by pity, my 
perennially faithfull friend.

Who am I,

this shuffling carcass of flesh 
and bone,

enclosed in a fortress,

a prisoner by choice,

behind my impregnable walls of 
stone.

Who I am,

matters little as I count the 
hours of each frigid night,

as my salvation rests,

in the tomorrows yet to come,

while I refuse to surrender to 
the darkness,

for as long as I can see,

the faintest glimmer,

of hope’s flickering light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/1/2013 3:22:00 AM
Very hopeful poem..even if we are a prisoner by choice..even if self pity is our faithful friend..We can still be saved when we overcome that selfpity..remove our chains ..then we feel the warmth of light..I love your thoughts..they re so mine in many ways.
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Date: 4/1/2013 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, again, dear Charma, for your kind, warm, and generous words. I am touched that my scribble touched you!
Date: 3/26/2013 9:33:00 AM
Love it! Another well written WOW poem!!
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Date: 3/26/2013 9:39:00 AM
Thank you, Rienie, for your warm and kind words! Stay well :-)
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