Who Am I

Moments before lower mind drifts into sleep, 
awareness self-aware, in the vast bardo,
sans identity, as pristine soul presence,
woos the universe to infuse magnetism
within our childlike heart, yearning for God’s touch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jones Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:46 PM
Somehow I missed this gem! Congrats on a win!
Seeker Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Thank you, Karen :)
Mitra Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:12 PM
This is excuisite So deep
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October 6, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Thank you, Debjani
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October 6, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Love the final line! Congratulations!
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October 6, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, Kim, this win came as a pleasant surprise
Anaya Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations US, wow a book!
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October 6, 2023 at 7:12 PM
:) thank you, Anaya
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October 6, 2023 at 1:30 AM
Congratulations, Seeker. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette
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October 6, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Thank you, Suzette ~ soup mail sent
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