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Who Am I

Moments before lower mind drifts into sleep, awareness self-aware, in the vast bardo, sans identity, as pristine soul presence, woos the universe to infuse magnetism within our childlike heart, yearning for God’s touch.

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/6/2023 11:46:00 PM

Somehow I missed this gem! Congrats on a win!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/7/2023 5:32:00 AM

Thank you, Karen :)

Debjani Mitra

Date: 10/6/2023 6:12:00 PM

This is excuisite So deep

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/6/2023 7:14:00 PM

Thank you, Debjani

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2023 2:54:00 PM

Love the final line! Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/6/2023 7:13:00 PM

Thank you, Kim, this win came as a pleasant surprise

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/6/2023 11:59:00 AM

Congratulations US, wow a book!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/6/2023 7:12:00 PM

:) thank you, Anaya

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/6/2023 1:30:00 AM

Congratulations, Seeker. Thank you for supporting my Hypnagogic Dream contest. In order to claim your prize of the book, DOWNTOWN – Poetic Devices, please soup mail me your e-mail address. Regards, Suzette

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/6/2023 7:12:00 PM

Thank you, Suzette ~ soup mail sent