Who Am I...?

Who am I?
I'm a Genie, 
with a wish inside...
Rub my belly,
Let's take a ride.
Got two more...
Just open the door.
Touch me...
You can bet,
Your dreams are On...
my magic Carpet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/12/2009 7:49:00 AM
I need a miracle. ------You have mail Abe
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Date: 5/11/2009 3:35:00 AM
Its probably just me but i took this poem as being a little bit saucy. I love the fun in your peoms
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Date: 5/10/2009 1:18:00 PM
Full of fun! Make me want to run around rubbing all sorts of bellies lol Kat x
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Date: 5/10/2009 6:50:00 AM
What a quaint poem Izzy, it also put a smile on my face, James,x
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Date: 5/10/2009 6:00:00 AM
Sweet write Izzy,..I like poetry that puts a smile on my face ! TY james
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Date: 5/10/2009 3:30:00 AM
HI Izzy, Hmmmm... It sounds like a powerful Genie, there. I think the magic carpet ride would make me forget about the 3 wishes. This is a delightful and whimsical poem. Very nicely written. FUN. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/9/2009 2:49:00 PM
What a delightful, uplifting verse, Izzy! Way to go -- on a "magic carpet." Love it!
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Date: 5/9/2009 9:46:00 AM
Nice, I'd pick Time travel Communication with animals, and true love
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Date: 5/9/2009 8:32:00 AM
playful delight! Izzy! you are very creative and fun to read! Jim
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Date: 5/9/2009 7:10:00 AM
so cute, its funny, a jolly litttle poem God bless you Izzy, may all your dreams come true, from diane
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