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Who

Who

Who's the l
or the you
or the we

Is it you
is it we
or is it
me

I see the trap
that we all
are caught 
in

but change the words
from the 'who'
and be
free.

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Date: 12/17/2024 3:17:00 AM
This is excellently deep.
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Date: 12/15/2023 2:36:00 AM
Simple thoughts are often best. Enjoy all the festive season offers you Jackie. Regards David in NZ
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/31/2023 7:26:00 AM
Thank you David for kind words. i had forgotten about this poem. written long time ago. Hope your well. Jackie x
Date: 3/7/2020 10:18:00 AM
Lovely, Jackie. Sometimes indeed that's all it boils down to.
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/31/2023 7:27:00 AM
so sorry i missed this message from you such a long time ago.. l dont always get alerts. thank you so much for kind words. take care Jackie x

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