Who

I stepped out on my lawn tonight
To catch a breath or two
Of cool night air when with a blare
An Owl questioned "Who?".

"Well, it is I", was my reply
"And now, just who are you?"
Then in a short he did report 
Again with that same "Who". 

"You", I said, "Is who", I said
With some authority
"Now who are thee, up in that tree?"
And "Who" again said he. 

"Oh! Now I see, when uttered thee
From high up in that tree
'Who' was thy introduction
And not a question be. 

So, Who is you and I am me. 
I'm glad we talked this out. 
Come again my feathered friend
You're welcome here about."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Heck Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 4:09 AM
Dear Stan - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 11, 2008 at 9:18 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 1, 2008 at 4:24 PM
Stan - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
Cc Avatar
October 28, 2008 at 2:06 AM
Haha. It's really tricky talking to birds, expecially owls. They're just so monosyllabic.
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October 27, 2008 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Sheart Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 3:28 PM
Hello Stan Congratulations on your wonderful poem making the semi-finals and best of luck in the finals!! Love Light Truth Patricia
George   Avatar
August 9, 2008 at 8:04 PM
Witty, clever and entertaining. Thank you for sharing, Stan. lainie
Austin Avatar
August 6, 2008 at 5:57 AM
Congrats, Stan. I love poetry with a twist, especially a humorous twist. Love, Daver
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August 5, 2008 at 2:42 PM
Still one of my favorites. Congratulations on being featured this week. Regards Heidie
Winter Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations Stan on this delightful poem being featured once again. Love, Shar
Young Avatar
August 4, 2008 at 8:50 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured this week! very well deserve! nice write warm regards GiNo,18,Philippines
Young Avatar
August 4, 2008 at 8:49 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured this week! very well deserve! nice write warm regards GiNo,18,Philippines
Jordan Avatar
August 4, 2008 at 7:07 AM
Stan - great job on this poem - rhyme and flow were great - story was very interesting - Congrats on being featured
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August 4, 2008 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations Stan on the refeaturing of "Who." Vince
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