Who

I sometimes read things that I’ve written and wonder who I’ve been and if the man it seems I am has been my best and was that really me? And if I had another chance to do things better could I? Or would I only be that man it seems I am.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 12/11/2016 8:16:00 AM

I bet many question this. To be yourself is the best thing you can do. :)

Red Omara
Date: 12/11/2016 9:15:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi. I appreciate your comments. I just read another very lovely poem of yours called On the Terrace. But guess what? You did it again - line 2. Please don't think I'm some kind of spelling obsessive. If I ever come across any more I won't say anything. You would be convinced I go looking for them.

Phil Capitano

Date: 11/29/2016 7:15:00 AM

We all question ourselves from time to time Red; be the best you can be and let the chips fall where they may. Namaste.