Supraja Kannan Poet Verse

Whitney 2 - Pack

Pack hurdles
                                           Sad memories
                                            Bad notions
                                         Worst tendencies
                                              in a bag,
                                           Lock it firmly,
                                    throw the key into the sea
   
Sep-5-2017



 For Whitney 2 Contest Sponsored by  Nette Onclaud

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Akkina Downing September 6, 2017 at 7:13 PM Yes I like that, deep in the ocean :) best of luck Supraja :)

Andrea Dietrich September 6, 2017 at 5:58 PM Love how you looked at this theme and did the contest!! Great metaphor.

Paul Callus September 6, 2017 at 1:44 PM I agree with you, Supraja...getting rid of that baggage can open the way for a brighter future. Regards // paul

Afolabi Muideen September 5, 2017 at 12:20 PM Good luck in the contest my friend. You have penned a beautiful poem.