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Dawn sheds light
On my escape
With one case,
Frozen in fear.
Seasonal fields
Share golden hues
With God's optimistic light.

9--4-17

Whitney 2 Contest
Sponsor Nette Onclaud 

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Date: 9/27/2017 9:12:00 AM
Hope for a new beginning, a beautiful thought Connie.
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Date: 9/11/2017 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Connie, Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:47:00 PM
Back to Congrats!!! Connie...great job my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/11/2017 5:40:00 PM
Connie, I love how you interpreted the picture with your verse here. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/11/2017 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations Connie. I love the ending :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 12:50:00 PM
Congrats Connie!
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Date: 9/11/2017 12:32:00 PM
Conrgratulations, Connie! This illustrates such a great moment of courage and faith!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/11/2017 2:56:00 PM
That is what I was going for Jack. Thank you you for your insightful comment. : )
Date: 9/11/2017 11:45:00 AM
connie, the positive energy along with the beauty of your lines make this a winner... happy congrats and thanks for taking part in this contest!..huggs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/11/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thank you you Nette. I tried to include the picture of the case but couldn't get it to show up. I enjoyed your contest and all the entries. : )
Date: 9/6/2017 5:59:00 PM
Connie, you did so well with this one. It's so interesting to me how we all saw it different ways!
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Date: 9/6/2017 1:31:00 PM
Overcoming fear and running away to freedom is not an easy step to take. I love the positive ending and show of faith. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/5/2017 8:17:00 PM
An absolutely beautiful poem Connie. Amazing lines, great ending! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/6/2017 3:37:00 PM
Thank you Susan. Those 10 winner contests leave so many out. I try to read all the entries. ; )
Date: 9/5/2017 12:37:00 PM
Connie, I love this verse! A fav.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/5/2017 7:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Carol. I am happy you like this enough to fave. It gives me hope. I will be happy of I don't get another N/A. Hugs, Connie : )
Date: 9/5/2017 12:21:00 PM
Good luck in the contest my friend. You have penned a beautiful poem. brilliant!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/5/2017 7:19:00 PM
I will need it. I am so glad you like this. Thank you! : )
Date: 9/5/2017 8:46:00 AM
Yes, God's light dismisses darkness, Connie. Well done! Janice
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Date: 9/5/2017 7:59:00 AM
Well done my dear Friend...a challenge to do...best wishes and luck Connie...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/5/2017 7:11:00 AM
- Excellent written, Connie - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2017 6:28:00 AM
Well written great poet. Good luck in the contest .
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Date: 9/5/2017 6:04:00 AM
You depicted a lovely scene for that suitcase--well presented and captured. Good luck Connie!
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