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Grandfather's Suitcase He left it, for me, she says. Inside it are his trilby and the books we used to read, and somehow, his scent of pipe. 9-5-2017

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Date: 9/16/2017 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful memories.
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/16/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thank you, James :)
Date: 9/11/2017 10:40:00 PM
Nicely done, Jack, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/16/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 9/11/2017 6:12:00 PM
Love the scent of the pipe. Congratulations.
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/11/2017 7:36:00 PM
thank you, Janis!
Date: 9/11/2017 6:05:00 PM
Scent of pipe gets you everytime! Congrats, Jack!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2017 6:17:00 AM
My dad used to have a set of pipes. Something sailor-like about that ;)
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/11/2017 7:38:00 PM
If i were a smoker, it would be pipes and cigars! thanks Kim!
Date: 9/11/2017 5:33:00 PM
wow, I just LOVE that final line. So cool!!
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/11/2017 7:37:00 PM
thank you, Andrea!
Date: 9/11/2017 2:24:00 PM
Excellent Jack. I love this one. Congratulations :)
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/11/2017 2:26:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi! :)
Date: 9/11/2017 1:35:00 PM
Visual and scented memories, Jack...congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/11/2017 1:51:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 9/11/2017 12:51:00 PM
Congrats!!! on the 1'st place my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/11/2017 1:24:00 PM
thanks WW Hope to see you in the Angels competition!
Date: 9/11/2017 12:31:00 PM
Such wonderful memories:-) congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/11/2017 12:47:00 PM
thank you Jan!
Date: 9/11/2017 10:30:00 AM
it's all about greeat mood, flow, substance, and an impactful ending...winning laurels for you as i thank you for this entry, jack.. huggs
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/11/2017 11:08:00 AM
thank nette! really enjoyed this challenge

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