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Whither It Goes

Our rosy love grew fast to bloom, Burnt in the heatwave of desire - Young and impervious to doom - Out-lusted, nothing to admire. We spurned our tender love, my rose; Its lustre faded, petals dried, Fast beating hearts, now hollow, froze - Nothing but thorns lodged deep inside. Short-sighted sweet impromptu love! Strong lasting roots grow underground - Well nurtured is the rose we have - And now it blossoms lifetime-round! March 20, 2023

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Date: 4/5/2023 5:54:00 AM
I'm tempted to use a bit of UK slang to describe your poem Margarita: 'Bloomin' Marvellous' :) Cheers - Gary
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 4/5/2023 7:04:00 AM
I love UK slang:) Thanks Gary, coming from you made my day!!!
Date: 3/21/2023 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful poem!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/23/2023 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 3/21/2023 7:05:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/23/2023 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 3/21/2023 4:38:00 AM
- Lovely written for our "Rose" ... love the last verse, Margarita - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/21/2023 4:50:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/20/2023 7:43:00 PM
Lovely-written analogy poem here, Margarita!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/21/2023 4:50:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/20/2023 4:54:00 PM
Love is like a wild rose, beautiful and calm, but willing to draw blood in it's defense. Very nice write, Maggie. Good luck!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/20/2023 7:18:00 PM
Acquitted then :) Thx
Date: 3/20/2023 4:10:00 PM
I love the ending here, where deep roots support enduring love. I wrote a poem about roses as a metaphor for love as well, maybe I should post that one! You have inspired me.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/20/2023 4:39:00 PM
Please do:)
Date: 3/20/2023 12:05:00 PM
Rosy inside and out! Good take on the prompt :)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/20/2023 4:39:00 PM
Trying to be romantic:)

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