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Whitewash

Just one line of cocaine from sniffing the white powdered abys She washes her poisonous laundry pegs the bottomless threads Retrieves her dead tired credit card from a pocket of dissolute fear 06th June 2018 written for three liner contest with 17 syllables max per line Syllables checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 6/25/2018 8:38:00 PM
Kudos to you on your win Kai. ~ Gershon
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/27/2018 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kai
Date: 6/8/2018 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations for your win my friend. So sad, those that are addicted to cocaine. Great poem my friend...
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/9/2018 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Robert. I never touched the white stuff myself and never will. Peace and wishes, Kai
Date: 6/7/2018 9:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :) great write, Kai. Hugs Eve
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/9/2018 4:05:00 AM
Thank you Eve. I appreciate that.
Date: 6/7/2018 7:30:00 PM
YOu said so much about her in those three lines. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 6/7/2018 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Kai :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations Kai. Tom
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:55:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 3rd place in the contest, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2018 12:35:00 PM
This one is potent as Mo commented.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/9/2018 3:58:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 6/6/2018 9:15:00 AM
Potent lines my friend. Well done. xomo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/9/2018 3:57:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. Never touched that white stuff and never will. XXX

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