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poem submitted to "Rhythm and Rubble" poetry contest, Kerry Bernatchez, sponsor 7/10/2026

WHITE WITNESS

A single white rose
rests within morning’s murmur~
soft-scented, still,
its silken hush shimmering
like a shy soul seeking speech.

Light leans along its edges,
a slow, silver slip of dawn
drifting down each petal.

The air around it listens,  
leaning into the low, lilting glow  
the bloom seems to breathe.

I trace its tender spiral~  
that subtle swirl of becoming,  
that circle of calm  
carved from cold earth and  
the long, lonely labor of growth.

Even the stem  
holds a quiet strength,  
a slender spine of green  
gathering the grace  
to lift what is luminous  
from what is lost.

And still~  
the rose remains a whisper,  
a white-winged witness  
to the world’s wandering sorrows.  
It stands in its soft solitude,  
shining through the ache,  
offering only openness,  
only the fragile faith  
of unfolding.

A single white rose~  
a small, steadfast star  
rooted in soil,  
rising toward sky,  
reminding the moment  
that beauty, even bruised,  
blooms.
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July 10, 2026 at 4:50 AM
"Even the stem holds a quiet strength, a slender spine of green gathering the grace" -- Great imagery. A rose is a charming vision, despite is laurel of thorns. Very nicely said, Sara.
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