White Spots

Pollen rushing

though the grass

as chipmunks dig

thoughtlessly.



White spots, a fawn

darts into

the morning sun

Doe's eyes sail,

opaque. Her child.



A hand through

the fence rouses

her over

the pure white spots

soon to fade. 



She eats.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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September 20, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Hi Jamie, this is such a deep powerful piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita
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September 18, 2014 at 4:09 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jamie - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 17, 2014 at 12:29 PM
Jamie, interesting, and awesome imagery,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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