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White Spots

Pollen rushing though the grass as chipmunks dig thoughtlessly. White spots, a fawn darts into the morning sun Doe's eyes sail, opaque. Her child. A hand through the fence rouses her over the pure white spots soon to fade. She eats.

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/20/2014 1:18:00 PM

Hi Jamie, this is such a deep powerful piece! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2014 4:09:00 AM

Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jamie - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/17/2014 12:29:00 PM

Jamie, interesting, and awesome imagery,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@