White Sphere

The realm I live in Within the white sphere of light Compels me to live Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/16/2012 6:35:00 AM

An introspective senryu, Russell!..science fiction or truth?...neat!! :) Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 6:40:00 PM

As Jack said, this is one uplifting little poem, my friend. Nicely said.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2012 4:50:00 PM

Love this uplifting piece, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2012 12:59:00 PM

Great living that one can do within that realm of light..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, there have been and are families that could not even have the price of a needle above what they had to have just to exist..Sad state of life for some people..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/15/2012 11:02:00 AM

divine in its essence, russell.. the light within beams!... on to the winners' circle, yes!.:) huggs!