White Silence

Winter coats proliferate,
the earth is stilled by snowflakes 
slowly drifting, swirling, shifting, 
sifting down,  a whirling, 
curling cloud of white confetti.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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March 6, 2009 at 7:03 AM
The wonderful imagery and good use of alliteration. I like the active verbs--they make the poem come alive. The title caught my attention. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing! Karen
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January 30, 2009 at 9:03 AM
This creates such a beautiful image in my mind, Keith. At times, when the snow is falling just this way, I love to stand there facing up, arms wide, to be a part of it. Just lovely. Love and hugs, Robin
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