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White Rose

WHITE Rose WHITE ~ At first GLANCE your overlapped petals are delicately fringed in shades of softest PEACH. WHITE ~ A BUZZING of bees hover near, drawn by your enticing honeyed GOLDEN anthers. WHITE ~ Your sweet FRAGRANCE captures the air around me until I'm aroused with the CRIMSON heat of passion. WHITE ~ What luscious FLAVOR would you leave upon the buds of my seeking PINK tongue? WHITE ~ My hand longs to STROKE the length of your tender GREEN stem as you bare it in expectation of being noticed. (Glance, peach, buzzing, golden, fragrance, crimson, flavor, pink, stroke, green) A glance was all I needed to bring a blush of peach to my cheeks. I am buzzing in anticipation for you to be framed in the sun's last golden rays of the day. Oh thorns, do not prick me so that a drop of crimson blood does not mask your mistress's fragrance from me. A taste of you would cast shame upon the pink stains left upon my lips from a strawberry. Other flowers will never feel the stroke of my hand upon them. They are green with envy because they cannot compete with the depth of your BEAUTY.

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Date: 11/14/2015 9:54:00 PM
I am so impressed with this wonderful piece Lin. I can easily see why it is a top winner and deservedly so! Congratulations! It is truly OUTSTANDING!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/15/2015 2:36:00 AM
Thanks, Connie. I'm so glad you came by to read it.
Date: 11/12/2015 1:48:00 PM
What a wonderful poem and well deserving of the win Lin, congratulations! Warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 11/12/2015 3:27:00 PM
I appreciate your kind comment...thanks.
Date: 11/12/2015 6:37:00 AM
Impressive sensual piece, I can see why it relieved top honours. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/12/2015 6:42:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. It didn't start out to be sensual, but she took me where she wanted me to go.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations Lin on your win! Wonderful imagery and wonderful write!
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Date: 11/12/2015 6:40:00 AM
Thanks, Michael...;)
Date: 11/11/2015 5:07:00 PM
Congrats on your superb win, Lin! Great poem :)
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Date: 11/11/2015 5:08:00 PM
Thanks, Laura.
Date: 11/11/2015 4:58:00 PM
Big applause and a 7 for your number one win with such an exquisitely beautiful piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 5:07:00 PM
I appreciate your congrats...thanks.
Date: 11/11/2015 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations in your win Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 5:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nayda.
Date: 11/11/2015 2:14:00 PM
Congrats on your colorful win..Way to go..Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 2:26:00 PM
Thank you, Sarah. and a good one for you with your Blueberries.
Date: 11/11/2015 1:51:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win Lin! :) -LUxxx
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura
Date: 11/11/2015 12:47:00 PM
Excellent work indeed! Congrats for your win!
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Date: 11/11/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thank you, Tasmina.
Date: 11/11/2015 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations.. :) beautiful!!! \
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Date: 11/11/2015 1:23:00 PM
I appreciate that...thanks
Date: 11/11/2015 10:37:00 AM
Beautiful write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Eve ;)
Date: 11/11/2015 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations, very imaginative use of words and skillfully constructed. You use good imagery and maintain a poetic flow throughout the whole piece. Emile.
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:07:00 AM
Thank you for such nice comments, Emile. I thought yours was golden (pun intended) well done.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:41:00 AM
nice win
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 10:06:00 AM
thanks skat
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 10:05:00 AM
Thank you for such a wonderful compliment, Carrie. It's very much appreciated.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:36:00 AM
You met this difficult challenge and wowed us !! Congratulations on a great winning poem!
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thank you for such a wonderful compliment, Carrie. It's very much appreciated.
Date: 11/11/2015 8:50:00 AM
Fabulous poem Lin many congrats on your win - i couldn't even get a poem started for the contest:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:53:00 AM
Give it another try, JAN. I think it may be easier if you focus on a topic and then build your thoughts around that. Thank you so much for reading this one. Hugs back to you.
Date: 11/11/2015 8:45:00 AM
Way to go, Lin. I just knew I would be seeing this one again on the winners' list!!
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Your compliments mean a lot to me.
Date: 11/11/2015 8:16:00 AM
Very creative Lin. A wonderful set of complex poems.
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, James. It took some thinking, but was so much fun.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win Lin! The 5 senses words you used were fantastic. I loved the way you put this all together at the end. Thank you for entering into my contest.
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:38:00 AM
Oh goodness... I'm honored, Tammy. Thank you for thinking so highly of this one.
Date: 10/18/2015 7:37:00 AM
Excellent poem.
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Date: 10/18/2015 7:42:00 AM
With gratitude...hugs for the compliment.
Date: 10/17/2015 4:05:00 PM
- A unique poem, beautifully written Lin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2015 5:34:00 PM
Hi, Anne Lise. I appreciate your compliments very much. ~ Lin ~
Date: 10/17/2015 6:18:00 AM
Great effort Lin and cleverly written. Love your White Rose. Enjoyed reading very much. I wrote a children's poem where Scotty the skunk want to be a rose in another life. If you get a chance check it out you might laugh a little. Have a wonderful day Lin. Thanks for your visit.
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:20:00 AM
I will certainly pay a visit to Scotty the skunk to see if that little stinker wanted to smell like a rose. LOL Thank you for your kind words, Michael!
Date: 10/16/2015 8:27:00 PM
wow, I am envious of those who have been able to do this challenge thus far. It's such a tricky one and it looks to me like you pulled it off with amazing imagery.
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Date: 10/16/2015 9:51:00 PM
A big "Thank You," Andrea. I had no idea what I was doing, and I'm still not sure it's what the host wants, but we'll see. Tricky? YES! I appreciate your compliments. ~ Lin ~

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