White Rose

The white rose she held
simply untimely miscue
dumped its white pale skin
in its prime, pierced her heart
this very day, and many more
with spun fancies that she dreams
in her sleep, she did run
as her heart did break
like the
white beautiful rose
that she was...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sirak Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 5:15 AM
Such poignant beauty in this one!
Shiells Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Hi Brooke, This is a tender beautiful and honest write my friend. Heartful read. Thank you for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah
Dylan Avatar
May 12, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Thank you deborah
Lindley Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 5:38 PM
Inspiring work.. My white rose grew into adulthood but is still as beautiful as ever!
Toil Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Dearest Brooke, Please see e-mail. Love & Hugs;) Ben
Dylan Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 4:08 PM
OKAY BEN THANKS
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