White Rose

it lies there alone,
one flower, on a coffin
that the flag once adorned
carrying  the soldier home,
brave hero, an only son.

White roses were strewn,
when the cortege was driven 
through crowded  lined  streets,
a flowered road of goodbyes
written in the rose of hope




April 7 2013
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Mannan Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 9:54 PM
Many congrats for this beautiful win dear. Sorry for the delay as I was travelling.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 5:05 AM
Gosh I have missed so many of these competitions I cannot congratulate everyone i never even saw them posted,, congrats on this one Sass xx
Roberts Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 5:37 AM
Thanks Mandy, I was quite pleased with this one ...Seren
A   Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Seren, a nice little win.... congratulations! *Linda
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 9:39 PM
Yes I am glad it was placed, cos it was liked by many, thanks again for stopping by...Seren
Puddifoot Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 4:08 PM
congrats on your win with this poignant piece, love the line "a flowered road of goodbyes" :)
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Thank you Charlotte, this is what happens when a soldier is brought home in a coffin ...Seren
Arowolo Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Lovely write,Seren....Congrats on your win...Well done...
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Thank you Olusegun ....Seren
Oyewole Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 11:49 AM
This is really beautiful Seren. White rose has always been my most favorite. You penned it well. Congrats on your win in the contest. AO
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Thanks A O for stopping and reading and commenting on my poem ...Seren
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 11:46 AM
so sad , so beautiful. congrats on your win Seren
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Thank you Francine ...Seren
Delaney Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 8:54 PM
Congrats Seren A very deserving win SuZ
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 12:36 AM
Thank you SuZ-D ......Seren
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Seren, this is really really good. Wish He had just put this one up in the top ten with all the other wonderful poems, but congrats on the winners' list.
Roberts Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 12:35 AM
Andrea, Thank you for thinking it was good enough for higher placing, at least I didnt get a N/A. Lol....Seren
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 6:49 PM
Seren congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Roberts Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Thank you Connie, thanks for reading and commenting .....Seren
May Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 2:58 PM
congrats on your win with this heartfelt piece
Carrillo Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 12:49 PM
This is very beautifu, but also sad. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest...... Lucilla
Roberts Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 6:51 PM
Thank you Lucilla ....Seren
Jones Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:31 PM
Most heart touching story Seren ....beautiful
Roberts Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:01 AM
Thank you, its for all the sons, husbands, brothers etc who come home from fighting in a coffin....Seren
Delaney Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 6:09 PM
Well done, Seren: Such a vivid image and such a sad subject, of love, in a different light.
Roberts Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:02 AM
Thank you Suzanne ....Seren
Roberts Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 3:45 PM
so sad, but lovely, best of luck in the contest (psst: soup mail)
Roberts Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:04 AM
Thank you Francine... Seren
Sivey Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 3:27 PM
This is a tenderhearted and beautiful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous poem this afternoon! What a fascinating piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:03 AM
Thank you Russell...... Seren
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Seren a very poignant write, I like it..soup mail....Davud
Roberts Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 1:03 AM
Thank you David, ....Seren
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