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White Pebbles

~ beneath the flowing stream smooth round pebbles pale and white tears of a river sprite shed eons ago ~

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/3/2011 2:21:00 AM

Very nicely put. Quite poetic.

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/30/2010 2:19:00 PM

Awesome imagery, Maggie...Congratulations on your HM in the contest! Enjoy your success, my friend...Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2010 3:26:00 PM

YOu did well with it! Congrats on making the winner circle and I really enjoyed the imagery of this one. Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/28/2010 9:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Tanka Me" contest Margaret. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/27/2010 2:23:00 PM

This is a keeper..Well done Margaret..congrats on yor success in the contest. BG

Date: 5/27/2010 1:39:00 PM

I really liked this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. A very deserving honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/27/2010 8:42:00 AM

Congrats Margaret on your winning an HM in the Tanka Me contest with this wonderful write... enjoy a special honor .. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/27/2010 7:46:00 AM

Such a tranquil and beautiful poem, Margaret! A lovely entry to Brian's contest! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/22/2010 10:08:00 AM

your 4th line adds such a different twist to this tanka, really enjoyed this, Margaret!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2010 9:27:00 AM

I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Margaret. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 5/20/2010 11:41:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Margaret Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 9:23:00 PM

This is really really good, Margaret. I gotta try one of these now!! LUv, andrea

Date: 5/20/2010 9:15:00 PM

Beautiful poem with lovely imagey. Enjoyed it. Best wishes in the contest. Keep that creative pen flowing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/20/2010 7:00:00 PM

What a magnificent tanka, Margaret! I love the comparison of those pebbles to the "tears of a river sprite." Excellent entry for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn