White Pebbles

~ beneath the flowing stream smooth round pebbles pale and white tears of a river sprite shed eons ago ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 2:21 AM
Very nicely put. Quite poetic.
Haick Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Awesome imagery, Maggie...Congratulations on your HM in the contest! Enjoy your success, my friend...Love, Audrey
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May 28, 2010 at 3:26 PM
YOu did well with it! Congrats on making the winner circle and I really enjoyed the imagery of this one. Andrea
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Tanka Me" contest Margaret. Love, Carol
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May 27, 2010 at 2:23 PM
This is a keeper..Well done Margaret..congrats on yor success in the contest. BG
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May 27, 2010 at 1:39 PM
I really liked this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. A very deserving honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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May 27, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Congrats Margaret on your winning an HM in the Tanka Me contest with this wonderful write... enjoy a special honor .. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Richards Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Such a tranquil and beautiful poem, Margaret! A lovely entry to Brian's contest! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
K. Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 10:08 AM
your 4th line adds such a different twist to this tanka, really enjoyed this, Margaret!
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 9:27 AM
I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Margaret. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
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May 20, 2010 at 11:41 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Margaret Rgds Brian
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May 20, 2010 at 9:23 PM
This is really really good, Margaret. I gotta try one of these now!! LUv, andrea
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May 20, 2010 at 9:15 PM
Beautiful poem with lovely imagey. Enjoyed it. Best wishes in the contest. Keep that creative pen flowing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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May 20, 2010 at 7:00 PM
What a magnificent tanka, Margaret! I love the comparison of those pebbles to the "tears of a river sprite." Excellent entry for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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