White Or Red?

White
by name
straw of hue
a light bouquet
draped temptingly in beads of condensed cool

a glass or two to share between two halves
becoming one
as passions
turn to
red

warm
spices
fruity notes
vanillas blush
enraptured in the realms of paradise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/22/2010 9:51:00 AM
Gosh, Sharon, again I have run out of poems of yours to view. Loved this one though so I came back to it. lUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/5/2010 6:20:00 AM
Beautiffuly write, Sharon! And best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for your kind comments and enjoy your day!..Ger:)
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Date: 8/4/2010 1:25:00 AM
Hi Sharon :) Upon seeing your title, I knew this had to do with wine ;) Really enjoyed how your tetractys developed from white to red passion--beautiful & romantic tetractys :) thanks again for your suggestions in my tetractys, it did work better -- nikko :)
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Date: 8/2/2010 9:20:00 PM
A very interseting approach to the tetracyts. Very clever. Did you see Nikko's? Wow. The recent ones I am seeing are really fine! I'm happy you wanted to copy that kiddie poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/2/2010 8:35:00 PM
Love these tetractys- beautifully done, sensual. I love "fruity notes" and "vanillas blush" Thank you for your lovely comments and the favorite thing- much appreciated! Hugs, kris
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Date: 8/2/2010 5:30:00 PM
Fine group of tetractys. Good luck if it is for the contest. Sharon
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Date: 8/2/2010 5:03:00 PM
beautiful write--enjoyed today!
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Date: 8/2/2010 3:33:00 PM
A beautiful write indeed.
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Date: 8/2/2010 1:57:00 PM
Lovely write, much enjoyed.. always Michael
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Date: 8/2/2010 1:40:00 PM
When I shop for wine again, I shall be thinking back to this poem. It's taken wine on a lovely journey, red or white >> James
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Date: 8/2/2010 1:17:00 PM
nice one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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