White Night

Iridescent cellar of midnight opens
Where  waterfall’s  hair ripples down -

Glossy locks splashing my face
To  rinse  past’s  unsolved  omissions –

Evening ivory bathing new promises.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:48 PM
wow, this is OUTSTANDING and a well deserved win. Congrats, Lyva
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Great depiction and beautifully written, congratulations
Kimathi Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Cosmic imagery I may say! Congrats Lyva, for your well-deserved first placement in the contest! ;-)
Lane Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 7:27 PM
hmmmm
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Lyva, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 4:40 PM
enjoyed how you used waterfall to depict the theme... beautifully done, lyva... warm congrats on your top slot and thanks for joining.. huggs
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