White Night

large feathery snowflakes gently fall...
a panoramic overlay conceals blurred landmarks...

young lovers walk holding hands
explore untrod virginal snowy paths
beneath a faint watchful moonlight chaperon...



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on October 14, 2017 for contest MINIMALIST sponsored by NETTE ONCLAUD  -  RANKED 4TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 8:56 PM
I really like the images in this one, Line. Congratulations on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 7:44 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Have an awesome week!
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 5:50 PM
Line, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Thanks Eve. I appreciate your encouragement. Have an awesome weekend!
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 5:33 PM
a grreat poem indeed...the flow,message and visuals make this a winner, line... congrats and thanks for moving me so...
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 6:40 PM
Thanks Nette, have an awesome weekend! I look forward to your next challenge. Line xx
Dutta Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Nice White Panorama with romantic touch. Really enjoyed Best Wishes.
Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Thank you Anisha. Greatly appreciate your visit and comment. Have an awesome week.
Cresswell Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Gives me a peaceful joyous feeling. I love a poem that takes me into it self and makes me react as if there in the scene.
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 1:01 PM
Thanks for your visit Patricia, I always appreciate your comments. Have an awesome day.
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