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White Moments In Time

White days
White nights
White alabaster arms and legs
White, crimson lights-

Oh, what seamless nights-
White moments in time
White memories - yours and mine,
White love, white hate
White demise-
of an inkling of what's left
of our white/fiery passion
upon white silken sheets...
Only that is not what made our love complete-

desirefeelingslost lovenostalgiaabc

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Randy Freie

August 29, 2025 at 9:55 PM

Aah, Fair Gwendolyn, the whiteness of my eyes, doth admire this supple prize. It lingers, so my fingers, oh so wise, doth caress its soft beauty, and it's my duty, well advised!

Robert James Liguori

December 10, 2024 at 3:06 PM

Amazing write! I love white too.

Skat A

May 5, 2016 at 2:46 AM

gwendolyn cloyd, :)

Gwendolyn Cloyd

February 1, 2021 at 11:02 PM

Yea!

Poet Destroyer A

April 22, 2016 at 11:16 AM

Nice to read this one again, Gwendolyn....linda

Gwendolyn Cloyd

October 5, 2020 at 7:54 AM

Thank you for your feed back. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Skat A

January 9, 2014 at 7:11 AM

Gwendolyn, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Gwendolyn Cloyd

October 5, 2020 at 7:53 AM

Thank you for your words of encouragement. Of course, I will accept you as one of my very first Poetry Soup friends. I am in my senior years and has written poetry as a means of expression and as an emotional outlet since I was a child. I write about , everything and anything, whatever comes to mind, or according to how I am feeling. Again, thanks-

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 8, 2014 at 3:16 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Gwendolyn ! - Lovely poem - well written - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gwendolyn Cloyd

October 5, 2020 at 7:55 AM

Thank you-

Aiyah Torres

January 7, 2014 at 4:56 PM

so passionate!!! ..this is a beautiful poem, gwendolyn :))

Gwendolyn Cloyd

October 5, 2020 at 7:56 AM

Thank you Aiyah-

Poet Destroyer A

January 7, 2014 at 4:12 PM

Love the truthful ending. , Gwendolyn ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

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