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White Moments In Time

White days White nights White alabaster arms and legs White, crimson lights- Oh, what seamless nights- White moments in time White memories - yours and mine, White love, white hate White demise- of an inkling of what's left of our white/fiery passion upon white silken sheets... Only that is not what made our love complete-

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Skat A

Date: 5/5/2016 2:46:00 AM

gwendolyn cloyd, :)

Gwendolyn Cloyd
Date: 2/1/2021 11:02:00 PM

Yea!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2016 11:16:00 AM

Nice to read this one again, Gwendolyn....linda

Gwendolyn Cloyd
Date: 10/5/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thank you for your feed back. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2014 7:11:00 AM

Gwendolyn, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Gwendolyn Cloyd
Date: 10/5/2020 7:53:00 AM

Thank you for your words of encouragement. Of course, I will accept you as one of my very first Poetry Soup friends. I am in my senior years and has written poetry as a means of expression and as an emotional outlet since I was a child. I write about , everything and anything, whatever comes to mind, or according to how I am feeling. Again, thanks-

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/8/2014 3:16:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Gwendolyn ! - Lovely poem - well written - Pleased to read your first poem. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gwendolyn Cloyd
Date: 10/5/2020 7:55:00 AM

Thank you-

Aiyah Torres

Date: 1/7/2014 4:56:00 PM

so passionate!!! ..this is a beautiful poem, gwendolyn :))

Gwendolyn Cloyd
Date: 10/5/2020 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Aiyah-

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/7/2014 4:12:00 PM

Love the truthful ending. , Gwendolyn ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@