White Marker

You see thousands I see one flowers adorn fields of memories my love died I am not sure his intent not at all he was a good man he was mine until war stole him he gave his life I gave my heart year after year I yearn for only him and cry for all of you I shall never forget
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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August 19, 2025 at 6:21 PM
This is one of the most well-packaged poems I've ever read. From the title, the verse, to the final line. It's heartbreakingly beautiful, incredibly intimate and personal, overwhelmingly saddening, and wonderfully written. I am certain this was not easy to share, but I'm so glad you did. Thank you, Aurore.
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May 30, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Wonderful Aurore, you speak from the heart.
Ella Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 10:07 PM
A beautiful poem for Memorial Day, Aurore <3 <3 <3
Allison Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 2:08 AM
A wonderful tribute for memorial day and the fallen soldiers Aurore.:-) hugs Jan xx
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