James Fraser Poet Tanka

White Marble Angels

Silence surrounds me
as I walk amidst greened lawns ~~.
My sense of freedom,
I finds so hard to absorb ~~.
White marble angels explain









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Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2010 at 8:53 PM Very nice image, James and thanks for your comments today. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts November 7, 2010 at 7:16 PM wonderful piece James

Sharon Ruebel November 7, 2010 at 4:59 PM James, A most beautiful and moving tribute to all the people War has taken. As Always, Shar

Katherine Wyatt November 7, 2010 at 3:55 PM I love the feeling you have created here...the last line is perfect...

Kim Hilliker November 7, 2010 at 2:42 PM Did the angels explain that there is freedom in silence? Great write, James. I enjoyed reading this today.