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White Lines In the Road


The white lines beckon
Adventure around each bend
The world awaits you
Make sure to call your mother
And remember the way home




12/23/13

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Carolyn Devonshire

January 6, 2014 at 4:33 PM

Dear LNC, Indeed, the white lines take us through many turns in our lives. I wanted to send you a Christmas card, but I didn't know where you are right now. Thanks for reading my poem and best wishes in the contest with this thought-provoking piece! Love, Carolyn

Peter Dome

December 25, 2013 at 2:09 PM

Really great write. like the bit about phoning mum, mums do worry no matter what age we are. well done. best wishes. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 24, 2013 at 3:49 AM

- Beautiful poem, Barbara! - Happy Christmas !!! - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2013 at 1:52 AM

Barbara, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Andrea Dietrich

December 23, 2013 at 9:59 PM

oh my , I quite love this one!! Hope you will do a tanka like this for my contest. I don't mind if the entries are traditional style when they look like this one!

Debbie Guzzi

December 23, 2013 at 6:47 PM

Merry Christmas, Light & Love

Ilene Bauer

December 23, 2013 at 4:25 PM

wonderful! love the ending, too...

Litan Dey

December 23, 2013 at 10:32 AM

I love the message your white line bears...great job dear!

Sara Kendrick

December 23, 2013 at 9:17 AM

Cute one..Enjoyed the chuckle..I think that I am being called by the while lines myself to do a little traveling..Thanks for the visit to my page..I have not decided what to enter in Andrea's contest..I am planning on using her titles to write some more for I have been in quite a dry spell with poems not just flowing..Sara