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White Lines In the Road

The white lines beckon Adventure around each bend The world awaits you Make sure to call your mother And remember the way home 12/23/13

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/6/2014 4:33:00 PM

Dear LNC, Indeed, the white lines take us through many turns in our lives. I wanted to send you a Christmas card, but I didn't know where you are right now. Thanks for reading my poem and best wishes in the contest with this thought-provoking piece! Love, Carolyn

Peter Dome

Date: 12/25/2013 2:09:00 PM

Really great write. like the bit about phoning mum, mums do worry no matter what age we are. well done. best wishes. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2013 3:49:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Barbara! - Happy Christmas !!! - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 1:52:00 AM

Barbara, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2013 9:59:00 PM

oh my , I quite love this one!! Hope you will do a tanka like this for my contest. I don't mind if the entries are traditional style when they look like this one!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/23/2013 6:47:00 PM

Merry Christmas, Light & Love

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/23/2013 4:25:00 PM

wonderful! love the ending, too...

Litan Dey

Date: 12/23/2013 10:32:00 AM

I love the message your white line bears...great job dear!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/23/2013 9:17:00 AM

Cute one..Enjoyed the chuckle..I think that I am being called by the while lines myself to do a little traveling..Thanks for the visit to my page..I have not decided what to enter in Andrea's contest..I am planning on using her titles to write some more for I have been in quite a dry spell with poems not just flowing..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/23/2013 8:19:00 AM

Beautiful images to steer someone home with white lines, Barbara