White Lay On Schuman Lake the Snow

The snow lay white on Schuman lake
this afternoon. The ice
gleamed in the sun. I went to take
a picture. It looked nice.

White lay on Schuman lake the snow,
I took my phone to capture
where near the bank the cattails grow.
Was careless in the rapture.

White lay the snow on Schuman lake.
I took a step – and crash
did not forsee the ice would break.
my foot went in with splash.

On Schuman lake, the snow lay white.
I wore nice shoes and suit!
The mud was deep, the ice had bite.
I wish I’d worn a boot.

On Schuman lake white lay the snow.
I hobbled to my car
and drove away with dripping toe
because I’d gone too far.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2020 at 8:14 PM
Love the way you reworked line 1 into the title then played with repetition, Agnes. Enjoyed this poem.
Smith Avatar
January 21, 2020 at 11:48 PM
Loved it Agnus, well done...
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