White Horse

Outside my window
Rushing and hurdling with no effort building  
I gaze at the foaming waves galloping towards the shore
no aberration to remember, no ambition it could not endorse
as no rock can ever crash the zealous white horse
no shady future to consider
no fears to make it shiver
There’s one aim, one goal
Where greater intentions never fall
to rise higher and reach the glory
to leave behind a rattling good story
Roll in, roll out
No distractions, no doubt.

7TH PLACE
For Eight Word Challenge Contest
Sponsor: Robert Haigh
words: outside, building, remember, horse, consider, future, intentions, greater
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Natasha , and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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March 15, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Thanks Eve :)
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March 14, 2018 at 11:50 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Natasha - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-)
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March 15, 2018 at 12:49 AM
Thanks Greg :)
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March 14, 2018 at 9:13 PM
A cracking write, Natasha ,love it. Well done. Viv x
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March 15, 2018 at 12:49 AM
Thanks Viv :)
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March 14, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Congrats on your win, Natasha.
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March 15, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Thanks :)
Blanca Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Enjoyed your write Natasha. "No shady future to consider no fears to make it shiver"
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March 6, 2018 at 2:11 AM
Thanks Carlos :)
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