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White Fluffy Snow Nursery Rhyme

Look at all the white fluffy snow, I see Birdie the old black crow. Mommy can I go out and play, yes but a coat and hat on this cold day. I have my coat and hat of red and gray, now I am on my way. The snow can be so much fun, the snowman is almost done. Around the snowman I can dance and run, inside for hot chocolate then back out for a rerun.

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Silent One

Date: 12/26/2023 6:27:00 AM

Lovek6 poem..Congratulations on your placement

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2023 7:42:00 AM

Thank You for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you love my "Nursery Rhyme" write. Have a fun day with a blessed 2024 writing away....................

Len Gasun

Date: 12/25/2023 8:56:00 PM

This is a very delightful, beautiful and enjoyable nursery rhyme my dear poet friend Paula. I've immensely enjoyed reading it. Thanks. Congratulations on your first place win! Hugs. May I also have this chance to greet you a very Merry Christmas! Wishing you and your family/loved ones all the BEST that the season has to offer. This occasion and this coming year, may you be gifted with countless blessings. Merry Christmas and a Prosperious New Year ahead! Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2023 7:40:00 AM

Thank You for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. 2024 will be filled with blessings if we will only look for them. Hugs... Have a fun day with a blessed 2024 writing away....................

Valsa George

Date: 12/25/2023 4:38:00 AM

You have composed a beautiful nursery rhyme on the latest season of the year. I enjoyed the little crow's excitement in playing in the snow and the mama crow's advice to the little one. Congratulations Paula on your well deserved first place win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2023 7:35:00 AM

Thank You for your note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Nursery Rhyme" write with my fun Birdie the old black crow. It was a young child looking out a window. Have a fun day writing away....................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/23/2023 7:02:00 AM

"1 Place" ~ White Fluffy Snow Nursery Rhyme~Date Written: 12/10/2023

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/18/2023 7:12:00 AM

- so fun and sweet, Paula ... GL in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/23/2023 7:01:00 AM

Thank You for your note and for your GL. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. It was fun to bringing to life. Hugs... Have a fun day writing away....................

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/14/2023 8:38:00 AM

Very sweet, Paula! Delightfully penned for the N/R contest. Great contender. Blessings to you and yours

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/14/2023 11:50:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a fun day writing away....................

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/13/2023 6:36:00 PM

This delightful composition, Paula, is sure to captivate the hearts of young readers and enchant them as they joyfully recite this endearing nursery rhyme.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 7:46:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" to be a delightful write. Nursery Rhymes/snow are for all ages. Have a fun day writing away.........

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/13/2023 7:41:00 AM

Kids, as well as, adults all, will find pleasure in the read of this likable nursery rhyme, Paula. Blessings, and Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 7:42:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Glad you liked my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. I hope kids/adults will enjoy my write. Have a fun day writing away.........

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/12/2023 5:39:00 PM

This is sweet and fun. I enjoyed this Paula :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 7:40:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. I enjoyed bringing it to life. Have a fun day writing away....................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/12/2023 7:37:00 AM

That’s lovely Paula, children will love reading and reciting this cute nursery rhyme… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 7:39:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Nursery Rhyme" write. I hope kids will love reading this one. Have a fun day writing away....................

Judy Ball

Date: 12/12/2023 1:17:00 AM

Too cute and sweet Paula. I could see my children when they were small running and playing in the snow and we made snowmen together. Good Stuff, God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/13/2023 7:38:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" to be too cute/sweet. Kids love the snow/snowmen. Have a fun day writing away.........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/10/2023 6:33:00 PM

Cute, Paula! How about that black birdie against the white backdrop... followed by colors. This is a paint-by-numbers poem for kiddies. Nice!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 7:26:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" to be a cute write. 1 blue sky/2 yellow sun/3 white clouds/4 black crow/5 coat and hat of red and gray. Now Kids paint-by-numbers. Have a fun day writing away.........

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/10/2023 6:32:00 PM

I love your cute nursery rhyme. The rhyme scheme was perfect. Hot cocoa and snow sounds like my kind of day. Nicely done, Paula! Have a great week ahead, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 7:29:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you liked my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. Kids of all ages love Hot chocolate/I sure do. A great drink for the winter or for a snowy day... Have a fun day writing away.........

Joseph May

Date: 12/10/2023 4:40:00 PM

A delightful write of having fun in the snow, Very nicely penned Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 7:17:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" to be a delightful write. Kids love the snow/adults hate to shovel it. Have a fun day writing away.........

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2023 11:56:00 AM

Hot chocolate can attract any child to come in.. lovely poem Paula..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 7:15:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you liked my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. Kids love Hot chocolate/so do I. A great drink for a snowy day... Have a fun day writing away.........

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/10/2023 10:31:00 AM

How you composed this rhyme is absolutely adorable and lovely. An evening of hot chocolate and snow play sounds delightful.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 7:09:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write and found it to be absolutely adorable/lovely. Oh yes, hot chocolate/snow playing is a ton of fun for any child. Have a fun day writing away.........

Ink Empress

Date: 12/10/2023 10:28:00 AM

This is beautiful and so cute how you’ve written this rhyme. Hot chocolate and fun in the snow sounds lovely. Pleasure reading this soul warming poem. Goodluck in the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/11/2023 7:02:00 AM

Thank You for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my "Nursery Rhyme" write and found it to be beautiful/so cute. I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a fun day writing away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/10/2023 10:07:00 AM

White Fluffy Snow Nursery Rhyme~Date Written: 12/10/2023