White feathers

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A - TYPES OF FORMS Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 04/16/2024

God sends pets without wings so no one will suspect they are angels ..."- Unkown Our invisible God, difficult to undescribe Him, Nobody saw Him, but He lives in our pets. Our dogs bark, we don't know what they say, until you know their meaning. They bark for many reasons, they say secretes we sometimes can't understand Our cats meow, nobody knows the meaning unless you are attached to them. A parakeet gives you a kiss because it means that loves you. Our Dear God made an Universe where the pets are disguised for us to choose them. Whoever you choose will be your choice, take care about them, because they last the most important time of your life. Pets are sent by our God to give us love, something we don't find in people most of the times. Angels with no wings flying next to us making our life happier. Be everything for them to live their whole life, don't take their whole life for you to be disguised with white feathers.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 5/16/2024 1:43:00 PM

My dearest Maria, good evening my sweet friend. This is an absolute delight to read with a stunning picture too. How true that God lives in all creatures especially our beloved pets. They bring so much joy, comfort, love and peace that they really are angel’s with no wings as your poem beautifully expresses. I love how you have written about the language of dogs, cats and birds too. How they try to communicate with us and how we must keep them safe and loved in our care. As you have poetically

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/17/2024 12:36:00 AM

Good morning Christina. Thanks a lot for your kind comment. I hope you are doing well?. I appreciate you passing by. Have a wonderful weekend my dear friend!

Christina Bowring
Date: 5/16/2024 1:45:00 PM

written, they love unconditionally much more than humans can do. I love the last line with the feathers especially. Good luck in the contest. I really enjoyed and appreciated it. Luv and hugs to you for a lovely weekend xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/15/2024 5:45:00 AM

Dear Maria, your heartfelt poem beautifully captures the divine essence of our beloved pets. The way you portray them as angels without wings, sent by God to grace our lives with unconditional love and companionship, is truly profound. Your poetic voice shows us how to cherish these precious beings who bring joy and peace to our existence and reciprocate the devotion they offer so freely. Maria, what a touching tribute to the sacred bond between humans and their animal companions. - Blessings, Daniel

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/15/2024 9:15:00 AM

Good afternoon Daniel. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I hope you have a great day my friend. Blessings!