White Broom

*A young man went out for a stroll in the snow 
Into a remote patch of icy blue Adirondacks.
It's been a few moons since he was last seen. 
They discovered his lithium car at the trailhead.
A white broom swept his footprints off the map.
They posted a vision of him sitting in the sunshine.
They're searching low and high for that cherub smile.
Prayers are swirling like glitter in a snow globe.
The ranger whispers about windchill and hope.
The forecaster says a fresh foot more of devilish snow.
They postponed the search until tomorrow.
They say a cardinal may chirp a psalm.
When souls wander into the beyond. 
A young man went out for a stroll in the snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Delaney-Barron Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 8:36 PM
This is beautiful and poignant! The sense of place and youth and finality is beautiful in your stark representation of the situation. I especially love your attention to the shape of your words! Brilliant!
Bianco Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 4:56 PM
Thank you, Fran,
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