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White Broom

*A young man went out for a stroll into a remote patch of icy blue Adirondak It's been a few moons since he was last seen they discovered his lithium car at the trailhead A white broom swept his footprints off the map They posted a vision of him sitting in the sunshine. They're searching low and high for that cherub smile Prayers are swirling like glitter in a snow globe the ranger whispers about windchill and hope forecaster says a fresh foot of devilish snow they postponed the search until tomorrow They say a cardinal may chirp a psalm when souls wander into the beyond A young man went out for a stroll*

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Date: 12/9/2024 8:36:00 PM
This is beautiful and poignant! The sense of place and youth and finality is beautiful in your stark representation of the situation. I especially love your attention to the shape of your words! Brilliant!
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 12/11/2024 4:56:00 PM
Thank you, Fran,

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