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white bell shaped flowers appear among pale green leaves.... one bumble-bee hums

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/17/2018 9:25:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery expressing your beautiful haiku Sara - but I understand your concerns over there being just one bumble-bee - hopefully there will be more bees to come as spring progresses.. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Jack Horne

Date: 2/26/2018 3:46:00 PM

another really beautiful haiku

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2018 3:50:00 PM

Jack, It seems there is only time for a Haiku along here lately. Sara

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/24/2018 7:00:00 AM

Nice imagery...Luck Mr. Bumble Bee...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2018 3:50:00 PM

Michael, If there was any pollen that one bee probably got filled in a short period of time. Easy pickens for him. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2018 7:30:00 PM

Cute one!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/26/2018 3:49:00 PM

Andrea, One bumble bee was seeking pollen in the barely open blossoms on the blueberry bush. I don't know how well pollenated they are going to be with only one bee. Thanks for stopping by. Sara