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Image result for pictures of dove with fluffed feathers standing on wooden fence post covered with frost

white

laminated white
trees, shrubs, green rose bushes' leaves....
brilliant sun rises
garden fence top board glistens
dove stands with fluffed feathers

naturetanka

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Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2025 at 7:42 PM

Great visual!

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2025 at 4:04 AM

Thank you, Kim. Those doves were all fluffed out yesterday before the snow trying to get all the seeds stuffed in before the weather changed to snow. Sara K

Valsa George

January 15, 2025 at 8:51 PM

Beautiful Tanka. From the picture of the dove, it is evident how cold is the air, though no white snow to be seen anywhere as Gershon has commented.

Sara Kendrick

January 16, 2025 at 4:35 AM

Yes, Valsa. We did not get snow, but the frost was thick and very white really frozen there for a few days. The frost had everything well coated. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

January 12, 2025 at 8:00 PM

Lovely tanka, Sara... btw: I fail to see any white (privilege) in these lines. ~ Inspector Gershon, Badge No. 006

Sara Kendrick

January 13, 2025 at 2:51 AM

Gershon, maybe I should have said pasted. LOL..Thanks for the humor. Sara K

Oliver Mckeithan

January 12, 2025 at 4:54 PM

Beautiful tanka. The scene is well described.

Sara Kendrick

January 13, 2025 at 2:50 AM

Thank you, Oliver. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Sotto Poet

January 12, 2025 at 2:29 PM

This is splendid, Sara. Your words weaved a wondrous tanka with vivid imagery.

Sara Kendrick

January 12, 2025 at 4:15 PM

Glad you enjoyed the vivid imagery, Sotto. Your visit is appreciated. Sara K

Bj Legros Kelley

January 12, 2025 at 1:57 PM

This is lovely Sara. You painted the scene so well with your words <3

Sara Kendrick

January 12, 2025 at 4:14 PM

Why, thank you, BJ. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 12, 2025 at 1:02 PM

- Beautifully written, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

January 12, 2025 at 1:22 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I love the smiley face. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

January 12, 2025 at 11:59 AM

pretty image as a dove stands with fluffed feathers.

Sara Kendrick

January 12, 2025 at 1:22 PM

Thank you, Kim. I know it has been hard on the birds because they are not used to the extreme cold. I carry hot water out every morn that the birdbaths are frozen so they can get a drink if they need it. Sara K

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