Whispers of the Waves

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Written: August 18, 2023 _______________________________________________________________ whispers of the waves beneath the mountain's embrace eternal serenade once more I hear the everlasting sea breathing beneath the mountain's fragrant

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/20/2023 1:52:00 PM

A breathtaking image created with amazing phrases. This Haiku is first class.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/19/2023 10:34:00 AM

Dear Sotto: The cycle of water captured so well in your Haiku. The fragrance of water is life itself. Best, SuZ

Jay Narain

Date: 8/19/2023 10:01:00 AM

Nice haiku. You get the feeling of sea and sky.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/19/2023 8:40:00 AM

So very nice and relaxing to read too :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2023 4:14:00 AM

Ahh!! I can feel the water's spray and smell the aroma of the freshness. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2023 6:45:00 PM

Great imagery and feeling you've created with this poem. Blessings friend