Whispers of the Night

Whispers in the wind of night
Soft voices travel swiftly
Sounds go lightly through darkness
Moving in the breeze

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 2:11 PM
vast imagery contained in these poetic lines Russell.. I so enjoy the Dodoitsu form of Japanese poetry luv..
Situation Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 9:43 PM
Why is everybody whispering?
Horne Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 2:43 PM
I love this atmospheric piece, Russell - it makes me think of a ghost, for some reason
Johnson Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 12:50 AM
great Dodoitsu here, the sounds upon a breeze. well done Russell mate....
Northeast Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 10:24 PM
This has a lovely whispery breezy flow ( looks like according to spell checker I wrote a fo-par, non the less it is what I wanted to say, blessings, bren ; )
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January 22, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Each new dodoitsu you write looks better than the previous ones. Good work Russell.
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