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Whispers of Love

Neither in a reclusive nor in restricted,
Close to the wind, whispers of love sail,
For want of a dialect with the beloved,
Impatient soul feeds on the holy grail !

His every look deep into my eyes,
Takes my breath, I heave a sigh,
Drumming beats echo heart to heart,
A music subtle yet melts the stars !

I find my soul dook in moonlight ,
Vivid thoughts put up a constant fight,
Create an aura around that enraptures,
Whispers of love go beyond capture !!




Written by Dr. Upma A. Sharma
On 8/4/14
Sponsor- Gail Angel Doyle


Now for contest- your best love poem 
Sponsor- PD
On 22/5/14

Now entered for contest "Your best love poem" by SKAT A

Copyright © Dr. Upma A. Sharma | Year Posted 2014

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Kp Nunez Date: 7/30/2015 2:21:00 AM "A music subtle yet melts the stars" An awesome line in a poem filled with beautiful lines to capture the feeling. Congratulations, Dr. Upma! hugs! Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 7/27/2015 9:57:00 AM LOVE THIS POEM . Big congrats on your fine win my friend!!A7 Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 7/26/2015 11:20:00 PM Dr Upma, l just stopped by tonight to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/26/2015 8:41:00 PM DR UPMA. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/28/2014 12:20:00 PM Thank you, for always supporting the soup and my comments. Dr Upma, it's an honor, in getting familiar with your poetry... thanks for the kind comment on my comment once again...Linda Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/27/2014 7:26:00 AM Beautiful write for a well-deserved win!!! Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:22:00 AM Thnx Pandita !

Elaine George Date: 5/27/2014 2:55:00 AM Very beautiful expression of love, Congratulatiions! Lainie. Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:22:00 AM Thnx Elaine ,,, appreciate !

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/26/2014 9:59:00 PM DR UMPA, Congratulations, thank you for the support. Enjoy my blog "Four Letter Words." if you like or have the time.. ((THIS IS A SWEET POEM ON LOVE)) Good night.... XOX~ LINDA Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:24:00 AM Thnx for much valued wishes PD !

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/24/2014 7:31:00 PM Congratulations for your win Dr. Upma. Just and excellent write! I love it! Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:27:00 AM Thnx for the time n the wishes Pandita !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 5/21/2014 5:20:00 AM 2ND PARAGRAPH MY FAVORITE.. :) KUDOS DR.. GBU from olive.. :) Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:28:00 AM Thnx Olive for being always there wid lovely comments //upma//

Paul Callus Date: 5/20/2014 7:46:00 AM Very romantic Dr Upma :) you've got some lovely phrases here, too. Congrats on your win. // paul Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:29:00 AM Thnx Paul ! always await having precious comments from you,,thanks for being there // upma//

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/20/2014 4:10:00 AM - Congratulations on your well deserved 12th place, Dr. Upma ! - Have a good day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:30:00 AM Thnx Anne Lise ! much valued comments !

Tim Smith Date: 5/19/2014 9:47:00 PM What a romantic piece..congrats on the win...hugs Tim Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:31:00 AM Thnx Tim ,, ur words mean a lot to me !

Frederic Parker Date: 5/19/2014 6:51:00 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Dr Upma Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/28/2014 5:21:00 AM Thnx Frederic,, appreciate ur time !

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/9/2014 10:05:00 AM I too have been moved by whispers, lovely piece. Thanks so much for your kind visit. Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/9/2014 12:34:00 PM Thanks Richard ,,,,, for the visit n the like !

Joseph May Date: 4/8/2014 3:02:00 PM Beautiful write Dr. ....winning wishes Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/9/2014 12:33:00 PM Thanks Joseph both for the like n for the wishes !

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/8/2014 2:38:00 PM Dear Dr. Upma, The imagery in this poem is quite striking. Lovely words, especially enjoyed the line "Close to the wind, whispers of love sail." Sometimes when I hear the wind, it does seem like it's speaking. Best wishes for success in the contest! Carolyn Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/9/2014 12:31:00 PM Carolyn thanks for liking my poem n ur lovely comments !

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/8/2014 5:03:00 AM - Beautiful poem Dr. Upma ! - Always enjoyable to read your poem - Good luck in the contest - Have a pleasant day - oxox // Anne-Lise ;) Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/9/2014 12:30:00 PM Thanks Anne Lise ! An honour !

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/8/2014 12:59:00 AM gorgeously romantic!! Login to Reply Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/9/2014 12:29:00 PM Really so Andrea ? Thanks for comments much sought for !