Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

Whispers of Love

Neither in a reclusive nor in restricted,
Close to the wind, whispers of love sail,
For want of a dialect with the beloved,
Impatient soul feeds on the holy grail !

His every look deep into my eyes,
Takes my breath, I heave a sigh,
Drumming beats echo heart to heart,
A music subtle yet melts the stars !

I find my soul dook in moonlight ,
Vivid thoughts put up a constant fight,
Create an aura around that enraptures,
Whispers of love go beyond capture !!




Written by Dr. Upma A. Sharma
On 8/4/14
Sponsor- Gail Angel Doyle


Now for contest- your best love poem 
Sponsor- PD
On 22/5/14

Now entered for contest "Your best love poem" by SKAT A

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Kp Nunez July 30, 2015 at 2:21 AM "A music subtle yet melts the stars" An awesome line in a poem filled with beautiful lines to capture the feeling. Congratulations, Dr. Upma! hugs!

Robert Lindley July 27, 2015 at 9:57 AM LOVE THIS POEM . Big congrats on your fine win my friend!!A7

Alexis Y. July 26, 2015 at 11:20 PM Dr Upma, l just stopped by tonight to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis

Skat A July 26, 2015 at 8:41 PM DR UPMA. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A May 28, 2014 at 12:20 PM Thank you, for always supporting the soup and my comments. Dr Upma, it's an honor, in getting familiar with your poetry... thanks for the kind comment on my comment once again...Linda

Pandita Sietesantos May 27, 2014 at 7:26 AM Beautiful write for a well-deserved win!!! Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:22 AM Thnx Pandita !

Elaine George May 27, 2014 at 2:55 AM Very beautiful expression of love, Congratulatiions! Lainie. Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:22 AM Thnx Elaine ,,, appreciate !

Poet Destroyer A May 26, 2014 at 9:59 PM DR UMPA, Congratulations, thank you for the support. Enjoy my blog "Four Letter Words." if you like or have the time.. ((THIS IS A SWEET POEM ON LOVE)) Good night.... XOX~ LINDA Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:24 AM Thnx for much valued wishes PD !

Pandita Sietesantos May 24, 2014 at 7:31 PM Congratulations for your win Dr. Upma. Just and excellent write! I love it! Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:27 AM Thnx for the time n the wishes Pandita !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 21, 2014 at 5:20 AM 2ND PARAGRAPH MY FAVORITE.. :) KUDOS DR.. GBU from olive.. :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:28 AM Thnx Olive for being always there wid lovely comments //upma//

Paul Callus May 20, 2014 at 7:46 AM Very romantic Dr Upma :) you've got some lovely phrases here, too. Congrats on your win. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:29 AM Thnx Paul ! always await having precious comments from you,,thanks for being there // upma//

Anne-Lise Andresen May 20, 2014 at 4:10 AM - Congratulations on your well deserved 12th place, Dr. Upma ! - Have a good day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:30 AM Thnx Anne Lise ! much valued comments !

Tim Smith May 19, 2014 at 9:47 PM What a romantic piece..congrats on the win...hugs Tim Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:31 AM Thnx Tim ,, ur words mean a lot to me !

Frederic Parker May 19, 2014 at 6:51 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Dr Upma Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 28, 2014 at 5:21 AM Thnx Frederic,, appreciate ur time !

Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2014 at 10:05 AM I too have been moved by whispers, lovely piece. Thanks so much for your kind visit. Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 9, 2014 at 12:34 PM Thanks Richard ,,,,, for the visit n the like !

Joseph May April 8, 2014 at 3:02 PM Beautiful write Dr. ....winning wishes Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 9, 2014 at 12:33 PM Thanks Joseph both for the like n for the wishes !

Carolyn Devonshire April 8, 2014 at 2:38 PM Dear Dr. Upma, The imagery in this poem is quite striking. Lovely words, especially enjoyed the line "Close to the wind, whispers of love sail." Sometimes when I hear the wind, it does seem like it's speaking. Best wishes for success in the contest! Carolyn Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 9, 2014 at 12:31 PM Carolyn thanks for liking my poem n ur lovely comments !

Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2014 at 5:03 AM - Beautiful poem Dr. Upma ! - Always enjoyable to read your poem - Good luck in the contest - Have a pleasant day - oxox // Anne-Lise ;) Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 9, 2014 at 12:30 PM Thanks Anne Lise ! An honour !

Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2014 at 12:59 AM gorgeously romantic!! Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 9, 2014 at 12:29 PM Really so Andrea ? Thanks for comments much sought for !