Whispers of Love

The local priest asked me to pray 
I did but I had doubt
For a while I lost my way
and I was holding out .

For me there could be no relenting 
I had yet to learn how to grieve
There could be no repenting 
because I had ceased to believe .

I was angry and hurting 
and to my eternal shame 
From the truth I won't be skirting 
Even the good lord got the blame.

In my mothers house feeling sorry for myself
Sorting through the things that charities might sell
I reached up to the cupboards top shelf
and my mum's favourite CD fell.

Then and there on the radio 
I heard her favourite hymn '' how great thou art ''
Why I started to cry i'll never know 
but I opened up my heart .

In the car on my way home 
Tears streaming down my face 
That hymn now played for me alone 
The good Lord I once more embrace .

I know my mother is happy in her new residency
and is now an angel in heaven high above
To me that song was her sending me 
The whispering of a mothers love .

I've opened my heart and found my way
Though I admit I'm just a man 
but now when I kneel down to pray 
I know the Good Lord understands.

By Darren Watson
01/04/2014
For the Whispers of love contest.
Sponsor . Gail Angel Doyle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/10/2014 6:01:00 PM
Just come across this one Darren a wonderful picture of the man you are shows a sense of vulnerability few would share. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/20/2014 5:53:00 AM
Wonderfully great Darren ! loved this one especially the first two n the last stanzas ,,, congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/20/2014 3:57:00 AM
- Congratulations on your well deserved 7th place, Darren - Have a great day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/19/2014 9:10:00 PM
A gentle and loving piece Darren...Congrats on the win
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Date: 4/9/2014 6:29:00 PM
love your poem beautiful
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Date: 4/2/2014 1:21:00 AM
wow, this is SO good, Darren. Showing a vulnerable side to yourself willing to submit to the Lord. To just pray and be able to find solace. Gail should love this one!!
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Date: 4/1/2014 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your heart, Darren. God meets us at an unexpected place, at a moment when we need him the most but He always finds us. Yours is truly a blessing :)
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Darren Watson
Date: 4/1/2014 10:49:00 AM
I'm not a deeply religious man Toquyen , I don't need a church to pray but I do pop into York minster now and again , There is a quiet corner there where I can pour my heart out , Thank you for the comment.
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