Whispers of a Vampire

Elizabeth, you can not escape my stare
A yearning pulls you back to my waiting arms
Each step you've taken becomes harder to bare
You are now unable to resist my charms

Every thought in your mind, is only of me
Your will is powerless, I am in control
Give me your essence, I am here, turn and see
Feel my eyes, gaze upon your master, behold

Slowly turn to me, look up to the terrace
Seize my stare as if it was your solemn wish
Take of me, all of me, revel in my trance
Obey my voice, offer yourself for ravish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/15/2010 5:19:00 AM
Whispers of a vampire is an excellent write you capture the hypnotic creature very well. TY for your comment on Pastor Lycan, so far no one has understood that a Lycan is a werewolf not a vampire.
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Date: 5/12/2010 4:20:00 PM
Very nice "HM", my friend! Maybe you or I can come up with an idea for a collaboration? Later, Jimmy
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Date: 5/11/2010 6:25:00 PM
o darnit, this title grabbed my attention again lol i commented it before and now i'm reading it again, cool write lol
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Date: 5/3/2010 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Iolanda's "Untold Secrets" contest Mitch. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:56:00 PM
Oh, boy, spoken just like a man. But very NICE. I see only three guys won this one, probably a lot more girls did it. Glad you got in the winner's circle. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserved win in my contest. Love, Iolandavsqy
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:36:00 PM
Interesting the difference in the man's viewpoint. Congratulations on your high placement. Joyce
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:03:00 PM
Unique write and congrats on your HM Mitch in Iolanda's contest with this interesting Quatrain... I luv vampire movies... this is a great write ..reminds me of Interview with a Vampire ..remember? enjoy your great honor ..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/29/2010 7:48:00 AM
Shivers down the spine as I read this, Mitch!! I'm sure this will do very well in the contest! Loved it! Btw, I'm sorry for not having been able to reply for the longest time--my internet connection sucks--hopefully you get enough sleep after you get home from work and I think staying at the Soup is a very fine way of relaxing after driving through all the traffic--well I hope there's not much traffic in your area..! :)
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Date: 4/28/2010 3:01:00 PM
really intense seduction of the bite, this is a nice one Mitch, have a nice,..p.d.
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:58:00 AM
Interesting way to go with the picture...Good luck in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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