Whispers In the Wind

whispers in the wind
         your voice carries a message
                my heart drifts away

Heidi Sands

5/9/22

Placed 2nd in the Haiku Nature Poetry Contest.
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Kauffman Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 11:27 AM
Back with congratulations! So happy to see this on the winners list! Blessings!
Sands Avatar
May 17, 2022 at 11:59 AM
Thank you Sam. Blessings :)
Krutsinger Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 10:55 PM
Incredible. Glad it won!
Sands Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:24 AM
Thank you very much Caren :)
Chamberlain Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Brilliant. I love your Haiku. Today I chose to read them all, as they are all so brilliant.
Sands Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Thank you very much Joanna. I hope you have a nice day. :)
Brul Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 2:45 PM
Very dreamy and passionate! Congratulations Heidi.
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 3:50 PM
Thank you JCB :)
Alex Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 7:01 AM
"my heart drifts away" - Highly romantic! Congratulations!
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 7:02 AM
Thank you very much Cristuraj :)
Poet Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Heidi, Congratulations on your winning placement in the Haiku contest. You wrote an excellent Haiku. Also, thank you for taking part. I much appreciate it.
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Thank you so much Sotto. :)
Smith Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 2:59 AM
Nature is whispering to us all the time, but we only half listening. Great use of three lines. Sometimes that is all it takes. Cheers David in NZ
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 5:34 AM
Thank you David. Cheers :)
Chamberlain Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 1:25 AM
I love your Haiku, it has a real sense of silence. Nicely penned. :-) definitely a favourite of mine.
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 5:33 AM
Thank you very much Joanna. I appreciate the Fave :)
Dutta Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 10:36 PM
Yes I agree. Off and on Gentle breeze recalls past
Sands Avatar
May 10, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Thank you Anisha :)
Kauffman Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 3:32 PM
This is soo dreamy Heidi. The wind really does whisper soft messages to our waiting hearts. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
Sands Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 5:22 PM
Thank you Sam. I appreciate your kind feedback. Blessings :)
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